Saturday, January 30, 2010

Haiku whenever I feel like it. Gosh!

Smiled as she found the
note she was looking for. Then
coffee soothed her mind.

17 comments:

Slamdunk said...

Well done. I have never been able to express my thoughts well without using 1/2 of a page.

secret agent woman said...

What are you going to write next, Napoleon?

jules said...

Slam- Thanks! :-)

Secret- Whatever I feel like I wanna write! Freaking idiot! (I think he says "freeking idiot, right?)

Eva Gallant said...

It's Saturday night.
I doubt that I can do this:
Haiku a response.

Captain Dumbass said...

I don't know what it is about my brain, but I cannot for the life of me put together a haiku. But now I want some coffee. And a martini.

dogimo said...

Love the thought progression! Because yes, sometimes, we need to have our minds soothed even after something pleasant turns up. And coffee is just the trick!

buffalodick said...

Do them any time you like! It doesn't have to be Monday to express yourself!
Food is to savor
Drinks are to compliment it
Both best with good friends

Dan said...

Simple, elegant, and to the point, very much like the author.

And now I have just realised I have called you simple.

I'm leaving now.

Kate said...

Very cool. I like how expressive you can be with so few words.

I really want coffee now

Kate xx
http://secretofficeconfessions.blogspot.com

Stephanie Faris said...

Coffee just wires me up!

Well done.

Kristen said...

So nervous right now,
tomorrow is a big day.
I must drink some wine!

JennyMac said...

the house to myself
music plays and tea is poured
what a gorgeous day

ModernMom said...

Fabulous!

Eternally Distracted said...

Coffee. The magic of coffee!

Tracie said...

I can't get the hang of haiku. I think counting the syllables is too much like math for my brain.

You are good at it. Hope you're having a great weekend!

MODG said...

coffee is my masturbation.

THAT is a poem.

buffalodick said...

Life throws you pitches
Sometimes luck is on your side
Play the hand you get